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My room-mate

Mary is my room-mate this semester. She is from Changhua and she has come to Tainan for one month. Now She lives in the school dorm.

Mary majors in Industiral Management. But she loves Information Management, and she has got many computer's licenses. So she wants to go to Canada learn about it. She is an easygoing girl, and she seldom gets angry. Nevertheless, sometimes if she is misunderstood, she will be angry.

She misses her family, and she has an older brother and two younger sisters.They are very close. Her older brother and her are study in the same school now, and they often stay in touch. Being the oldest daughter, she always likes to help her parents. She tells me her graduation, she wants to earn much money to pay the house loan. She doesn't want her parents to work hard.

When she has free time, she loves to play online games, watch baseball games, and read 17th century's books. She doesn't love movie stars and singers, but she only loves beaseball stars, and her favorite star is Wang in Yankees. Mary is an optimistic and independent girl, and I hope I will become the girl like her. Her computer skills are so good that Ican ask her some problems about computers and learn a lot of skills about computers. We also like baseball, and maybe we can watch baseball games together.

Sometime we share our secrets with each other, and I also enjoy our time together. So I hope we can keep our friendship forever.

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Mary is my room-mate this semester. She is from Changhua and she comes Tainan one month. Now she lives in school dorm.

Mary majors in Industrial Management. But she loves Information Management, until now she has got many computer's licenses. So she wants to go to Canada learn about it. She is a easygoing girl. She seldom gets angry. Nevertheless some things she expressed is misunderstand, she will angers. But her angry time is very short.

She misses her family, and she has an older brother and two younger sisters. They are very closed. Like her older brother studies in the same school now, but they often stay in touch. She is the first daughter, she always wants to do some things for her family. She says after she graduates, she wants to earn money to pay the house loan. She doesn't want to her parents work hard.

At spare time, she loves to play onlines games, watch baseball games, and read 17 century's books. She doesn't love movie stars and singers, but she only loves baseball stars, and her favorite star is Wang in Yankees.Mary is an optimistic and independent girl, and I hope I can become like her. Her computer's skills are good, so I can ask her some problems about computer and learn a variety of computer's skills. We also like baseball, maybe we can watch baseball games together.

Sometime we talk some things on our mind, and I also enjoy our time together. So I hope our friendship can keep forever.

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Q:Chinuahua is divided into two regions. It is the largest Mexican state. One region is a mountainous area in the west. The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.
A:Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state is divided into be a mountainous area in the west and a desert basin in the north and east.
3.
Q:Jamaica is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.
A:Jamaica the third largest island in the Carribbean Sea is one of the world's leading producers of Bauxite that is an ore and Aluminum is made from there.
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Q:Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remains of the Titanic. The Titanic was the "unsinkable" passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It struck an iceberg in 1912.
A:Robert Ballard an oceanorgrapher made headings in 1985, he discovered the remains of the Titanic the "unsinkable "passenger ship has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912 and struck an icegerg in 1912.
5.
Q:William Shakespeare's father was a glove maker and a twon official. William Shespear's father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon. Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75miles northwest of London.
A:William Shakespeare's father Tohn Shakespeare owned a shop in Straford-upon-Avon a town that is about 75miles northwest of London
was a glove maker and a town official.
6.
Q:The Republic odf Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
A:The Rupublic of Yemen located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula is an ancient land, which has been host to many prosperous civilizations includong the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

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I. Main idea
Who?Mary Where?in the badroom When?this semester

II. Body
Basic background information
from Changhua, come to Tainan one month ago, live in school dorm
interests play online games, watch baseball games
favorite star is Wang(王建民)in Yankees
future's goal:earn money to pay the house loan
misses her family
loves to read some books of 17 century
wish: go to Canada learn about Information Management
Writer's personal reactions
Mary is an optimistic and independent girl.
I can learn a variety of computer's skills.
We may watch baseball games together.

III. Conclusion
I can learn a lot of thing from her.
I hope our friendship can keep for a long time.
I wish I can become like her that do everything by herself.

How to make the nutrient hamburger

"Hamburger" is a noun that everyone knows. Now we can buy a lot of kinds hamburgers in some fast-food stores. Sometimes we can make some nutrient hamburgers by oursalves. And it's easy to make.
First, prapare some hamburger's breads, mayonnaises, mashed onions, cheeses, slice tomatoes, vegetables, peppers, diced meat. Then, put and mix the diced meat, mashed onions, and peppers in the bowl. And fired them. Next, spread some mayonnaises on the hamburger's breads. Then, toast them three minutes in the oven. Third, open the hamburger's breads and put the vegetable, a slice tomato, meat, and cheese. Finally, the nutrient hamburgers are finished.

How a breakfast cereal is made.

First, the wheat is heavested from the field and transported to the silos. Then it is stored in the silos. Next the grain is cooked to soften it. After it is cut and formed into thin strips. Then these are woven into biscuits. And each biscuits is baked until brown. Finally it is packed ready to be eaten .