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I. Main idea
Who?Mary Where?in the badroom When?this semester
II. Body
Basic background information
from Changhua, come to Tainan one month ago, live in school dorm
interests play online games, watch baseball games
favorite star is Wang(王建民)in Yankees
future's goal:earn money to pay the house loan
misses her family
loves to read some books of 17 century
wish: go to Canada learn about Information Management
Writer's personal reactions
Mary is an optimistic and independent girl.
I can learn a variety of computer's skills.
We may watch baseball games together.
III. Conclusion
I can learn a lot of thing from her.
I hope our friendship can keep for a long time.
I wish I can become like her that do everything by herself.
Who?Mary Where?in the badroom When?this semester
II. Body
Basic background information
from Changhua, come to Tainan one month ago, live in school dorm
interests play online games, watch baseball games
favorite star is Wang(王建民)in Yankees
future's goal:earn money to pay the house loan
misses her family
loves to read some books of 17 century
wish: go to Canada learn about Information Management
Writer's personal reactions
Mary is an optimistic and independent girl.
I can learn a variety of computer's skills.
We may watch baseball games together.
III. Conclusion
I can learn a lot of thing from her.
I hope our friendship can keep for a long time.
I wish I can become like her that do everything by herself.
posted by zu_en | 10:45 PM
3 Comments:
It will be better if you write more about Mary's characteristics (your reactions)and conclusion.
favorite star如果是改成favorite baseball star好像會比較好,應為是寫王建民
OK. You can go ahead to write your essay. Good luck.
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