Summary 1
A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. And he knew his father would get him a graduation present. So he often went to a dealer’s showroom, he wanted to get a sports car. On the morning of his graduation, his father gave him a graduation present – a leather-bound Bible. The young man angered and leaved the house and Bible. After many years, the young man was successful in business. Then he realized his father was old. Since the graduation day, he never saw him. Perhaps he should go to him. When he went home, he saw that Bible. He opened it and he found a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. He father bought a sports car that he had desired.
posted by zu_en | 10:17 AM
1 Comments:
1.The stucture is quite clear to understand. I like the writing style the best in Zona's summary.
2.Yes, it is clear. Sure, she listed the source and cited it correctly.
3.Yes, it is clear.
4.Yes, I think it is clear and fine.
5.Yes, I identify the same thesis.
6.No, I don't think my peer miss any key points from her summary.
7.No, she didn't.
8.No
9.Not really. But I think she might be careful with the grammar.
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